gctme 发表于 2011-12-27 13:05   全显示 1楼
感觉文章综合了很多因素,比如交通工具情结(火车),御姐、乱伦(堂嫂)、被动、引诱、熟女等,结合的还不错,就是感觉行文有些匆忙,前段铺垫不够,进入情节有些太快,过程中描写可以再细腻一点。
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